JOHN HARRISON +
Double agents
Some sentences are double agents.
They have no allegiance and haven't committed to one meaning.
Some sentences like, "I never said she stole my money" are septuple agents. A reader could speculate seven meanings depending which word they emphasise.
- I never said she stole my money
- I never said she stole my money
- I never said she stole my money
- I never said she stole my money
- I never said she stole my money
- I never said she stole my money
- I never said she stole my money
Translation:
- Someone else said it
- I don't say things like that
- I only thought it
- Someone else stole it
- She borrowed it
- She stole someone else's money
- She stole something else
This example is at the extreme end of things but it shows the sensitive nature of the written word.
How to uncover these traitors
- Read your work out loud immediately after you’ve written it
- Read your work out loud a day after you’ve written it
- Have someone else read your work out loud
What seems obvious to you, the writer, can be understood entirely differently by a fresh reader.
But you can reveal the errors to yourself with time away from the words. When you return, having forgotten what the writer intended, you will see them in a new light.